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kriscatIn Guilty Pleasure, you clearly state, in chapter 16* that Josh is Anita's 16 year old stepbrother.
In the Lunatic Café, which take place after GP, Josh is suddenly fifteen, and Anita calls him her baby brother. (chapter 14)*
In the Killing Dance, you clearly state that Anita's dad and Judith had Josh together. (chapter 22)*
What's up with that? If you were a fanfic author, stuff like that would hopefully been chought by a beta. Perhaps thats what you need.
*Yes, I know, I have no life. I'm currently going though the entire series looking for mentions of her family for a fic idea that may not even turn out to a fic...
In the Lunatic Café, which take place after GP, Josh is suddenly fifteen, and Anita calls him her baby brother. (chapter 14)*
In the Killing Dance, you clearly state that Anita's dad and Judith had Josh together. (chapter 22)*
What's up with that? If you were a fanfic author, stuff like that would hopefully been chought by a beta. Perhaps thats what you need.
*Yes, I know, I have no life. I'm currently going though the entire series looking for mentions of her family for a fic idea that may not even turn out to a fic...
